Thursday, September 27, 2007

Poems

The Whisper of the Wind

The whisper of the wind,

Telling me a secret.

A secret too dark,

Too lonely for you.

The whisper of the wind,

Grabs my attention.

Tells me a secret,

That no one else can hear.

The whisper of the wind,

My only protection.

Tells me a secret,

A secret all my own.

The whisper of the wind,

Tells me a secret.

A secret I hold dear,

Fore I am all alone.



I Sit Here Crying

Watching closely,

From the outside.

So much to do,

So much to hide.

To think that I,

Was one of them.

To think that I,

Could hurt my friends.

Don’t want to hurt.

Don’t want to hide.

Don’t want to look

Down from the sky.

So all alone,

I sit here watching.

I sit here hiding.

I sit here crying.

Drenched in Sorrow

I feel it as it runs down my face.

I hear it as it falls to the ground.

I see it as I hold my hands to my face.

I realize after it’s too late,

This was not the right answer,

This should not have been my fate.





These are a bunch of my poems from when I was in Creative writing last year as well. I didn't turn any of these in, but I love these ones more than the ones I did turn in. So tell me what you think ok?

3 comments:

Panda Girl said...

Wow I think those poems are really good! They are sad though, but I like sad poems ;)

Kar Kar said...

Drenched in Sorrow
I feel it as it runs down my broken expression.
I hear it as it falls to the ground.
I see it as I hold my hands to my face.
I realize after it’s too late,
This was not the right answer,
This should not have been my fate.


Okay, I fixed it for you like you asked me to, though now I think it may be too long. You might want to talk to some other people and see what they think. Tell me what you think and I can change it and stuff.

Mads said...

Thanks Izzi. I love your suggestions, and now I believe I might have to say that you helped me write it.